Bài mẫu sample IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 14/01/2022: The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006.
Dàn ý đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1
IEC sẽ miêu tả biểu đồ với 1 câu mở bài (Intro), 1 đoạn miêu tả tổng quát (Overview), và 2 đoạn thân bài miêu tả chi tiết (Detailed Description)
Mở bài: Paraphrase đề bài để giới thiệu lại đề bài cho người chấm
Miêu tả tổng quát: sẽ chỉ ra các đặc điểm quan trọng, nổi bật nhất trong hình
Thân bài: Ở bài này IEC sẽ đi theo thứ tự thời gian
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Body 1: Mô tả số liệu của nhóm tuổi từ 16 – 24
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Body 2: Mô tả số liệu của 2 nhóm tuổi là 25-44 và 45-54
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Body 3: Mô tả số liệu của 2 nhóm tuổi còn lại
IELTS Writing Task 1: Overview
- The younger the participants were, the more they used the Internet.
- The number of people who enjoyed the Internet increased.
Body paragraph 1:
- 16-24 years old
- The most active Internet users
Body paragraph 2:
- 25-44 and 45-54 years old
- Increased steadily
- Slightly higher in the 45-54 years old group in the first two years, whose difference with the 25-44 age group was 10% in both years
Body paragraph 3:
- The remaining groups
- Half of the people from 55-64 years old that were interested in using the Internet daily in 2006
- The least engaged Internet users were the 65+ age group with a moderate increase
📝 Bài mẫu
The chart displays the ratio of daily adult Internet users across various age groups in the UK between 2003 and 2006.
Overall, it is clear that the younger the participants were, the more they used the Internet. Furthermore, the number of people who enjoyed the Internet has an upward trend over the studied period.
First, the 16-24 years old participants were the most active Internet users with the general percentage of 80% and over throughout the four-year period, even peaking at 100% in 2005. However, the figure for this age group dropped slightly to 90% in the next year.
The second and third most avid Internet users were citizens aged 25-44 and 45-54, with relatively similar rates, increasing steadily from approximately 50% and 60%, in turn, to 80% by the end of 2006. The figure was slightly higher in the 45-54 years old group in the first two years, whose difference with the 25-44 age group was 10% in both years.
The statistics for the remaining groups were considerably less, with only about half of the people from 55-64 years old that were interested in using the Internet daily in 2006. However, the figure for this age group was lower in the previous years, standing at around a third of its population. The least engaged Internet users were the 65+ age group with a moderate increase from 18% to 20% between 2003-2006. Notably, in 2003, people aged 65 and above did not use the Internet.
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